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Unlikely poem for unlikely love I told myself, I will make you a song, With all of my love and thoughts so strong.. But it's never easy composing one, For my heart and mind's tired and done. You're so far away, free as well, For I'm not suited, as you can tell.. Nor do I believe in false promises, Go find the girl that will love you no less.. Is it cowardice? The question's repeated, To set you fly free and search decided.. Though we love so short of time and seasons, I'll always remember deeply, knowing no reasons.. Just go, away from my memory, and let me be in my own misery.. My only wish is for you to find glory, Then come back once more and kiss me sorry.. Sabi ko, igagawa kita ng kanta Dala ang laman ng damdamin't diwa Bagkus di pala gayon kadali Pagkat puso't isip ay namimighati.. Malayo ka na, malaya din pala Di katulad ko ang iyong inakala Ako'y tapos na sa maling pag asam Hanapin ang pag ibig na sa iyo'y mainam.. Naitanong ko na rin, karuwagan ba ito? Palayain ang isang pusong tulad mo Hindi man nasukat sa tagal ng panahon Ating sandali ba't ang hapdi ng hayon.. Sige na alis na, sa abot ng ala ala Wala kang iiwan na pangako't salita Hangarin ko ligaya' mo'y masumpungan Bumalik ka at ako'y hagkan ng paalam.. 
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Really wow, wowwww. So heartfelt! I'm a senior citizen . Don't expect me to remember anything 
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Sis, Very nice and meaningful.  Greatest feelings in the world when two souls profess a love for each other...
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Hello sis sexy. Actually, tagalog version is the original, I translated to english for my language speaking friends. As it turned out, I cant think of a tagalog title, so the order reversal. For my "margarita guy..." 
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Sis, Very nice and meaningful. blue margarita baby.. Sana maalala nya ko kahit paminsan minsan lang  ..(kumanta!!) he he he..
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Really wow, wowwww. So heartfelt! Thanks for appreciating..Seldom we see poems made in tagalog vernacular anymore. The signs of modern times, go with the flow 'ika nga. Still, I'm trying..
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12/9/2011 4:34 am |
LEt me tell you something, Thet: "Only people who are in love, or are hurt, who can create a lovely poem like this...."..I've done this several times, and I just felt that "natural poet" in me...Just vent, it's free!...Very nice one! Just call me ELZ 
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Hello sir. Thank you for the comment. Mutual admiration for your works as well. Keep on!
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12/9/2011 4:46 am |
Hala!  akala ko nawala ang post ko!  Hindi ako sanay na paatras ang order ng comments.. ( I mean, starting from the latest to earlier ) Just call me ELZ
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12/10/2011 1:29 am |
Setting someone free, letting them go to find happiness is also freedom giving to one`s self  Very nice poem, heartfelt, ty for sharing 
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Setting someone free, letting them go to find happiness is also freedom giving to one`s self Very nice poem, heartfelt, ty for sharing
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Thank you sis AceL for dropping by.. Yap, setting him free also means giving him the chance to come back to me. He just might. I'm not closing my door...and my heart for him.
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Sis, Bakit kaya naka relate si Ka Bert? May unfinished love story?  Secret ha! Share naman sis.. Thanks
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Hala! akala ko nawala ang post ko! Hindi ako sanay na paatras ang order ng comments.. ( I mean, starting from the latest to earlier )  )Thanks for the visit
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LEt me tell you something, Thet: "Only people who are in love, or are hurt, who can create a lovely poem like this...."..I've done this several times, and I just felt that "natural poet" in me...Just vent, it's free!...Very nice one! Like a songwriter or even a singer or a poet like you and me, to be effective at what we do, may pinaghuhugutan (daw???)ng emotions.. My mind's more productive when i'm lonely or just missing someone. When i'm in love, I can't think of nothing else but him, for how can I still compose or write when I have my poetry in motion beside me?  Glad you like it. Thanks.
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